Wednesday, 28 September 2011

CRIT DAY!

What a day... ahh lovely, delightful! so today I crit Kibeom Park, Ji Sun Lee, Jeanny Tatiana Machuca Montano.

So my work was the first to be crit today! and i recieved positive feedback from people which i was glad to get because i put a lot of effort into it this 2 weeks. and now im looking forward to hopefully developing my project further for the final crit! YUS!

Then at 10:30 I moved to the animation group to crit Kibeom Park, here is a link to his blog http://kibomkun.wordpress.com/ his animation was very good! well made and he obviously took alot and alot of photos, you could really see the development! definate M material there and i enjoyed his ideas of a projection space and having engineers planners architects and an analyst all working in the same office! Very clear and extremely well drawn! great work!

Next was Ji Sun Lee, http://jslee92.tumblr.com/ I dont know if she has updated her blog yet but her project seemed interesting and i liked her movie, i look forward to seeing how she develops this space for her final presentation!

Then finally it came to Jeanny http://jeannysdesign.blogspot.com/ another good video although taking more photos could have helped. also very interesting gestural use of materials, and perhaps if she turned the page over and worked on the back instead of working over her drawings so it was clearer as to what was what but overall great work Jeanny.

so, did I hear free weekend? no. I heard, time to get history done so it doesn't eat into next weeks design time!

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